{"id":1040,"date":"2011-06-15T19:08:37","date_gmt":"2011-06-15T19:08:37","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/?p=1040"},"modified":"2011-06-15T19:08:37","modified_gmt":"2011-06-15T19:08:37","slug":"non-instant-karma-we-all-shine-on","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/?p=1040","title":{"rendered":"Non-Instant Karma &#8212; We All Shine On"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;ve recently been writing a very tricky chapter of The Angel in which Kim falls over and hurts herself and believes it might signify some sort of bad karma &#8212; which it may well be bearing in mind what she&#8217;s been up to. It&#8217;s quite a crucial point in the plot and I&#8217;ve found that I&#8217;ve put her in a situation that&#8217;s full of dilemmas and choices &#8212; which I suppose is good for the novel but quite risky to write in case I go off down a blind alley.<\/p>\n<p>I originally wrote it predominantly with dialogue between Kim and James and relatively little interior exposition. When I workshopped this with the ex-City die-hards the majority view was that it would benefit from much more of Kim&#8217;s internal debate. (We also had a discussion about whether characters would have ostensibly frank conversations volunteering the number of sexual partners they&#8217;d had &#8212; which is perhaps the subject for another post.)<\/p>\n<p>So I rewrote the chapter in a very different style &#8212; in places with long paragraphs of contemplation about what motivates one through life, etc. I then took advantage of a tutorial with Jenny Mayhew, our first term tutor on the MA at MMU, to get some feedback on the balance between interior\/exterior. She thought it was generally about right &#8212; which shows the City feedback had helped but that there were some over-long deliberations which could be cut.<\/p>\n<p>Jenny also gave some advice about increasing the amount of &#8216;stage-direction&#8217; and playing up aspects of the fantasy and dreaming in the dialogue &#8212; things I&#8217;d deliberately toned down after having feedback in the opposite direction in the previous term. Jenny&#8217;s advice tends to echo my natural style and inclination, which is not particularly lean or taut, more observational and discursive.<\/p>\n<p>I re-jigged again and added in some new ideas, some lifted directly from a conversation about different names for <a title=\"Google Images for Sticky Willy\" href=\"http:\/\/www.google.co.uk\/search?hl=en&amp;xhr=t&amp;q=sticky+willy&amp;cp=10&amp;bav=on.2,or.r_gc.r_pw.&amp;biw=1280&amp;bih=685&amp;um=1&amp;ie=UTF-8&amp;tbm=isch&amp;source=og&amp;sa=N&amp;tab=wi\" target=\"_blank\">common field weeds<\/a> in England and Scotland. The weeds discussion was in the office in London where I&#8217;ve now been working for the past four weeks, of which perhaps more in future posts. Time spent in this job explains the relative lack of blog posts as I&#8217;m burning the candle at both ends, catching the 0637 train into Marylebone and not going to bed correspondingly early enough as I&#8217;m trying to keep the writing still moving forwards &#8212; although to look on the bright side I&#8217;m close to some of my locations to return to do easy research.<\/p>\n<p>Last night a dedicated group of the MMU MA students workshopped a revised draft of the chapter following Jenny&#8217;s comments (we do this without any tutor involvement from the university so shows we must be relatively dedicated and, to use one of Emma&#8217;s horrible HR phrases &#8216;self-starters&#8217;).<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve still yet to re-read the transcript of the online discussion, which is always very useful, but the material generated a lot of discussion &#8212; it must have done as we &#8216;chatzied&#8217; for nearly an hour. (To get an hour of four people&#8217;s time &#8212; plus their reading in advance &#8212; on a piece of around 3,000 words was very fortunate &#8212; another student had to drop her piece at the last minute.)<\/p>\n<p>We&#8217;ve got one more workshopping session left with Emily in about ten days time and then a long break for the summer &#8212; the MMU term finishes at the same time. As far as I&#8217;m aware, about four people from the City course have finished &#8212; or are close to finishing &#8212; their novels, including two who are in the workshopping group. Another four or five of us are making steady progress but aren&#8217;t there yet.<\/p>\n<p>I must have written enough words for a respectable length novel &#8212; as an example I extended the original 2,500 word extract mentioned above by at least another 2,000 words in the rewriting &#8212; and I&#8217;m sure I can find a use for much of that, if not in the original chapter then elsewhere.<\/p>\n<p>In our MMU workshopping session last night one of the other students presented a chapter-by-chapter breakdown of her projected novel, which reminded me that I&#8217;m long overdue a re-assessment of where I&#8217;m at. I don&#8217;t feel I&#8217;ve diverged too much from the original plot that I <a title=\"Planning MacNovel\" href=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/?p=153\" target=\"_blank\">planned out with post-it notes<\/a> well over a year ago but I&#8217;ve probably only covered about half the planned events or chapters, although what I&#8217;ve written has expanded in word count beyond that which what I originally anticipated.<\/p>\n<p>Maybe because of Kim&#8217;s interest in karma, I&#8217;ve been noticing a few instances of Angel-related serendipity to inspire me to keep plugging on with the writing.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_1041\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1041\" style=\"width: 400px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Street.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-1041\" title=\"Angel-Street EC1\" src=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Street.jpg\" alt=\"Angel Street EC1\" width=\"400\" height=\"393\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Street.jpg 400w, https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Street-300x294.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-1041\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Angel Street EC1<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>The first was the name of a street I noticed in the City near Pasternoster Square and opposite bombed-out<a title=\"Wikipedia Christ Church Greyfriars\" href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Christ_Church_Greyfriars\" target=\"_blank\"> Christ&#8217;s Church Greyfriars<\/a>, where I&#8217;m planning to have James and Kim sit and have a drunken conversation on their first day together &#8212; the street is, appropriately, Angel Street.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_1042\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1042\" style=\"width: 400px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/The-Angel-Old-Street.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-1042\" title=\"The-Angel,-Old-Street\" src=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/The-Angel-Old-Street.jpg\" alt=\"The Angel, Old Street\" width=\"400\" height=\"531\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/The-Angel-Old-Street.jpg 400w, https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/The-Angel-Old-Street-225x300.jpg 225w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-1042\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">The Angel, Old Street<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Then I also belatedly noticed that the pub over the road from Mike B&#8217;s wonderfully stylish apartment near Old Street where we&#8217;ve been meeting to do our Saturday workshops is also called, you guessed, The Angel &#8212; although looking like a traditional London boozer it&#8217;s a very different sort of Angel to the thatched country local I&#8217;m going to write about &#8212; but it&#8217;s a nice co-incidence anyway.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_1043\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1043\" style=\"width: 400px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Bicester.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-1043\" title=\"Angel-Bicester\" src=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Bicester.jpg\" alt=\"The Angel, Bicester\" width=\"400\" height=\"376\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Bicester.jpg 400w, https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/06\/Angel-Bicester-300x282.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 400px) 100vw, 400px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-1043\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">The Angel, Sheep Street, Bicester<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>And, just for completeness, although there&#8217;s no special connection to me, here&#8217;s another Angel &#8212; this time in Bicester. This is a town that Emma would never dream of living in but she goes there fairly regularly to snap up a few bargains or ten at <a title=\"Bicester Village\" href=\"http:\/\/www.bicestervillage.com\/en\/home\/home\" target=\"_blank\">Bicester Village<\/a> &#8212; outlet store shopping centre for all brands she likes to dress in. Perhaps James might slope off for a pint there while she browses in Alexander McQueen, Diesel, Jimmy Choo, , Karen Millan, Radley, Hobbs, maybe buying Kim a cheap\u00c2\u00a0Superdry T-shirt and perhaps even nipping into\u00c2\u00a0<a title=\"Agent Provocateur at Bicester Village\" href=\"http:\/\/www.bicestervillage.com\/en\/brand-directory\/brands\/agent-provocateur?category=lingerie&amp;\" target=\"_blank\">Agent Provocateur<\/a>.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;ve recently been writing a very tricky chapter of The Angel in which Kim falls over and hurts herself and believes it might signify some sort of bad karma &#8212; which it may well be bearing in mind what she&#8217;s been up to. It&#8217;s quite a crucial point in the plot and I&#8217;ve found that &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/?p=1040\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Non-Instant Karma &#8212; We All Shine On&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[111],"tags":[680,683,14,117,28,663,681,166,355,682,1262,80],"class_list":["post-1040","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-writing-process","tag-bicester-village","tag-commuting","tag-dialogue","tag-exposition","tag-feedback","tag-internal-dialogue","tag-karma","tag-planning","tag-progress","tag-serendipity","tag-the-angel","tag-workshops"],"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1040","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1040"}],"version-history":[{"count":7,"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1040\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1057,"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1040\/revisions\/1057"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1040"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1040"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.macnovel.org.uk\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1040"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}