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My Other Magnum Opus
Apart from the two novels in progress I’ve also authored a more prosaic volume over the past fifteen months or so. And — spit on me now — I’ve decided to self-publish it. I don’t have much capital so it’s … Continue reading
An Off Stage Question
I was wondering about the point in the last post where David Nicholls mentions the impact of having important event happen ‘off stage’ and their impact being made greater when viewed from the perspective of their subsequent impact on characters’ … Continue reading
Posted in Plot, Structure
Tagged less is more, narrative arc, novel length, Plot, point of view, Structure, word count
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One Day I Went to Listen To David Nicholls
I’m rather late in posting about this but last week I went along to the Sunday Times Oxford Literary Festival at Christ Church College, Oxford. I was hoping to spend the best part of a day there but one session … Continue reading
Posted in Influences
Tagged David Nicholls, fictional technique, internal dialogue, One Day, Oxford Literary Festival, Plot, Structure, theme
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One Day
‘One Day’ by David Nicholls won the Sainsbury’s Popular Fiction prize at the Galaxy National Book Awards last week. I’ve mentioned this book in passing a couple of times on this blog since I read it in the summer. I’ve … Continue reading
Posted in character, Fictional Genres, Plot, Publishing, Structure
Tagged adverbs, Amazon reviews, book covers, character, cinematic novels, Creative Writing Classes, David Nicholls, dialogue, Galaxy National Book Awards, genre, marketing, One Day, pop music, Publishing, Structure, the Smiths, workshops, writing from opposite gender POV
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‘A Beginning, A Muddle and An End’?
Interesting blog on the Guardian Books website today by Robert McCrum. He talks about Ford Madox Ford’s advice that the literary quality or narrative power of a novel should never be judged by the opening alone but by reading a … Continue reading
Posted in Publishing
Tagged agents, book promotion, consistency, e-books, Ford Madox Ford, marketing, motivation, opening chapters, Page 99 test, Philip Larkin, Publishing, readings, Robert McCrum, Structure, theme
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The Narrative Center
As mentioned in the last post, I just spent a very long weekend in Center Parcs (staying until late Monday afternoon. trying to get most value for money). I’ve been to all the Center Parcs in the country although the … Continue reading
Posted in Plot, Research
Tagged Action Company Challenge, Aerial Adventure, author, BA, Center Parcs, customer service, Disneyland, Elveden, holidays, Maslow's hierarchy of needs, MBA, motivation, narrative, narrator, Penny Lane, planning, Plot, psychology, Research, security, Structure, subconscious, The Economist, Thomson Holidays
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‘Is It Any Good?’
I would guess anyone who doesn’t ask themselves this during the course of writing a novel is not going to produce a very good one. What’s probably not such a good idea is to include this angst in comments accompanying … Continue reading
Posted in Uncategorized, Writing Process
Tagged character, Creative Writing Classes, feedback, Structure, tutorials
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Prologue?
Rick from the course had a look at some of the first chapters of The Angel. He made quite an interesting suggestion regarding the selection for the reading event that’s had me thinking. At the moment I have an opening … Continue reading
Looking for Inspiration
I wrote quite a bit in a short time up until the last Saturday workshop — around 7,000 words of the beginning of ‘The Angel — two sizeable chapters or perhaps three or four shorter ones. I tend to like … Continue reading
Opening the Novel?
Unlike the majority of my fellow students on the City course I’ve not approached the writing of either of my novels-in-progress in any kind of sequence — either chronologically or in anticipation of the eventual order in the book. I’m … Continue reading
Posted in Structure, The Angel
Tagged backstory, computer programming, fire, inciting action, James, Kim, non-linerar thinking, opening chapters, planning, Plot, plot points, real life, Structure, tutorials, Village Underground
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The Shock of the New
It’s going to be quite an intense day on Saturday for a few of us: Rick, Nick and myself have both a reading and a tutorial. The reading is c. 2,250 words and the tutorial extract can be up to … Continue reading
Posted in The Angel
Tagged Alan Ayckbourn, Andy Warhol, character, cliche, Cy Twombly, ending, Miroslaw Balka, Roy Lichtenstein, Structure, Tate Gallery, theme, tutorials, wine tasting scene
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‘The Angel’ Changes
I reworked the synopsis of ‘The Angel’ based on the feedback I’d received. Probably the biggest change was that I gave James and Emma a different backstory that changed the start of the novel — I married them — unhappily … Continue reading
Posted in Synopses, Work in Progress
Tagged character, feedback, Plot, Structure, synopsis
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Perils of Living in the Country
Last night I ended up getting a good knowledge of the many traffic lights along a 15 mile stretch of the A41 by crawling along at about 5mph. This was due to all the traffic coming off the M1 due … Continue reading
Posted in Fictional Techniques, Structure
Tagged Arsenal, essence of a novel, Spreadsheet, Structure, traffic
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